ok, I read it and it was great i didnt expect the plot twist at the end tho, this would be a great story if both views of the characters would be used on the story telling, (my opinion)it would give great thril, excitement, and mystery to both the characters if oucomes would differ if a certain choice would be made... nice work looking forward to the next update :>
This VN is off to a pretty good start. Effective use of music, sound effects and good backgrounds. The setting is interesting and from this intro you can already see some of the challenges to be faced. MC's place in the world is quite odd and unexpected, and will obviously factor heavily in those challenges.
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fresh blood to read :>
so exciting isn't it?
ok, I read it and it was great i didnt expect the plot twist at the end tho, this would be a great story if both views of the characters would be used on the story telling, (my opinion)it would give great thril, excitement, and mystery to both the characters if oucomes would differ if a certain choice would be made... nice work looking forward to the next update :>
It's great without a doubt the best van that I've played in this style I look forward to the next version
Thx you so much QwQ
I must say that all of Rayark's music is copyrighted.
You should try to find free material.
Well thx for saying. I'll see what I can do.
This VN is off to a pretty good start. Effective use of music, sound effects and good backgrounds. The setting is interesting and from this intro you can already see some of the challenges to be faced. MC's place in the world is quite odd and unexpected, and will obviously factor heavily in those challenges.
Thx!