Yes it is. If you follow my patreon you would receive some updates like new CGs sprites BGs and music. Im curreclty translating the game to english. Thanks for the question ^w^
By the way, I think it’s time for me to speak out about this novel, the author, get ready, because I will be unshakable and strict, like Nolan to Nikolai) I really liked this novel, especially how we are being prepared Nolan’s conversation with the dragon who wants everything to take him as a husband, I HIGHLY HOPE that you will not stop and will delight us with your short story!
Внимание, у кого не работает русский язык, после того, как вы его поставили, тыкайте в место, где была кнопка "start", начнётся история уже на языке, который вы выбрали и остаётся не забыть сделать сохранение, в дальнейшем ошибки этой не будет, если я не понятно объяснил, то дайте знать, я сделаю пояснение со скринами.
"Attention, for whom the Russian language does not work, after you put it, poke in the place where the "start" button was, the story will begin already in the language that you have chosen and it remains not to forget to save, in the future this error will not be , if I did not explain clearly, then let me know, I will make an explanation with screenshots."
I liked it. The communal bath scene with the back and forth of a first person narrative from Nolan's perspective to a first person narrative from Nicolai's perspective kinda gave me whiplash though.
Read it all and being honest,kinda left a weak impression. It feels more like an edgy self insert fic made by an inexperienced writer. Really hope not only that the writing gets better but that also Nolan gets some guts and becomes more independent
Also it doesn't help that the premise sounds a bit cliche and Nicolai,wich i assume is the main love interest,has a generic design and is shown to be your typical edgelord
Oof that's some hard feedback to read. This is my first time writing and sharing a story so I guess some rough edges are to be expected. The next update will include more insight into Nicolai's past and his motivations which hopefully elevate him above "edgelord" status. There is also a refinment of the earlier scenes such as between Nolan and Souldro in the hallway to better portray Nolan's inner turmoil.
Thanks for the review, it's a shame the story didn't resonate with you.
One thing I noticed was that in the scene where Nolan's crying, an instrumental version of the Hatsune Miku song "Rolling Girl" by WOWAKA was playing. I don't know if it was intentional, but if it was, nice touch :)
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I was on the fence about this but now I'm interested good work so far!
thanks! :3
Is game still alive?
Yes it is. If you follow my patreon you would receive some updates like new CGs sprites BGs and music. Im curreclty translating the game to english. Thanks for the question ^w^
I can’t say for sure about the translation error, because I solved it a time ago, I apologize for the uselessness in this matter
No problem
By the way, I think it’s time for me to speak out about this novel, the author, get ready, because I will be unshakable and strict, like Nolan to Nikolai) I really liked this novel, especially how we are being prepared Nolan’s conversation with the dragon who wants everything to take him as a husband, I HIGHLY HOPE that you will not stop and will delight us with your short story!
Thank you! DOn't worry, Im working on the vn Im just slow
Sorry, I wrote this for Russian speakers, because they personally have a bug with translation
But it got fixed with this update?
Внимание, у кого не работает русский язык, после того, как вы его поставили, тыкайте в место, где была кнопка "start", начнётся история уже на языке, который вы выбрали и остаётся не забыть сделать сохранение, в дальнейшем ошибки этой не будет, если я не понятно объяснил, то дайте знать, я сделаю пояснение со скринами.
Oh... English please X3
According to Google Translate it says
"Attention, for whom the Russian language does not work, after you put it, poke in the place where the "start" button was, the story will begin already in the language that you have chosen and it remains not to forget to save, in the future this error will not be , if I did not explain clearly, then let me know, I will make an explanation with screenshots."
Why the translation into Russian does not work?
It dont work? It should work, it was only to you that it isnt working?
So it is, when I select the Russian language in the settings, this happens.
Hmmmm I might know what is happening, lemme see here
"Here "- where exactly? what are you speaking about?
I said on my files X3, an expression. I updated the build you should able to play it without problems now (I hope)
I liked it. The communal bath scene with the back and forth of a first person narrative from Nolan's perspective to a first person narrative from Nicolai's perspective kinda gave me whiplash though.
Loved the update after awhile from Hiatus. Keep up the great work!
Thanks :D
Will the new update come out today?
In a few moments :D
where is the download for android?
Im sorry but happened a little bug that i had to delete the public version for android. Dont worry I will put it back when patreon release got public
cant wait for public update
You can pay 1 dolar or wait 2 weeks for it
Nice update!!
You already played it? :0
Weeeeell..
Not to lower your courage onto this game, i um i don't have patreon..
Buttttt!! I'm looking forward for future updates on public!!
Stay Safe!!
Fair X3
I will wait for this vn to update until the end of my life☺️☺️☺️
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA thank you orz
Read it all and being honest,kinda left a weak impression. It feels more like an edgy self insert fic made by an inexperienced writer. Really hope not only that the writing gets better but that also Nolan gets some guts and becomes more independent
Also it doesn't help that the premise sounds a bit cliche and Nicolai,wich i assume is the main love interest,has a generic design and is shown to be your typical edgelord
Oof that's some hard feedback to read. This is my first time writing and sharing a story so I guess some rough edges are to be expected. The next update will include more insight into Nicolai's past and his motivations which hopefully elevate him above "edgelord" status. There is also a refinment of the earlier scenes such as between Nolan and Souldro in the hallway to better portray Nolan's inner turmoil.
Thanks for the review, it's a shame the story didn't resonate with you.
when will be ubdates
Sorry if is taking so long to post the new update, Im working on it but real life stuff is making it complicated
in some future I will translate it into Spanish because I don't know English, that's why I translated the comment in google
One thing I noticed was that in the scene where Nolan's crying, an instrumental version of the Hatsune Miku song "Rolling Girl" by WOWAKA was playing. I don't know if it was intentional, but if it was, nice touch :)
That is intencional yes! Rolling Girl is my fav song of wowaka, and that song basicly define nolans (and mine) life as a whole